I would like some feedback to improve my work!
1. How comfortable was it for you to read the tape? Was she understandable?
2. Text bubbles. Was it clear what character it was? Is the text placed appropriately?
3. You thought "this is a very long time, what's the point?" or "I want to read more, why are there so few frames per chapter?"
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I would like some feedback to improve my work! 1. How comfortable was it for you to read the tape? Was she understandable? 2. Text bubbles. Was it clear what character it was? Is the text placed appropriately? 3. You thought "this is a very long time, what's the point?" or "I want to read more, why are there so few frames per chapter?"
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