Fateful Tale: Folly of the Flame Mistress

Part 2

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Ryan Beichner

One thing that I wanted to change was the pacing of the comic. I feel as if I could have made it more impactful by having certain moments be in bigger panels. A lot of the story is pretty condensed as well. I also need to work on my backgrounds and try to achieve a unique aesthetic for the world. Still, I'm happy with what I have here! Next part I'll elaborate on the origins of the comic.

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